Week 5 feedback

I get some advice on the class this week. 
Overall, the text looks too big and chunky. It means the rulers from all pages should be thinner, some of the text should have a smaller size such as the running head and the caption text.
The publishing text should be on the other side of the half title and the opposite of the content page.
The running head should be less dominated.

Rather than just flush left all the text. rearranging the category text would be good.

The caption text is too strong.




Be careful about the resolution of the picture.

Be consistent about the color of the picture. 

Just like the opener of vox+1, try to arrange the category text in a more interesting way.

There should be more examples on each classification and the text should be smaller.

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