Feedback week 4

After i get feedback earlier this week. I create this version. I change the color so the cover is quiet rather than loudly. And i get some more feedback on the class. 

1.The page on the right is not necessary.

2.The text is too black. Clarendon has a very strong feature. I should just use light font rather that regular.
3.There are too many box elements all over the book. It doesn't work. Getting rid of those blue box.
4.Footnote at the bottom right should be lighten rather than being highlighted. 
5.Unifying the subtitle font size (the yellow one on the right)with the ones on the other pages. 
6.Too dark, I have been suggested to use inverted color which means it might looks better with a pumpkin yellow background.
Still, get rid of the box box of the title.
7.The caption beside the "Aa" is not a caption.

8."centaur" Spelling wrong at the example section.
9.There should be text on the anatomy section to describe the image.  
10.Get rid of the "caption" on the caption and try san font on the caption text.
11.Capital letters should be included on the example text.

12.There should be text on the left column just like the the first classification.



Get rid of all the boxes. 


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