feedback week 3&4

I get some feedback from my tutor earlier this week.

There are anatomy sections on each classification. I was using illustrator to create and import the image to the file while is time consuming. She suggests me to draw them directly in indesign.

She also suggest me to get fonts from computer by package the file.

1.the color on the page is too bright.

2.the copy right text is supposed to be on another spread.

The inside margin is still too tight now.

The title looks cramped here.

The red box is confusing

The base of the text should sit on the line

Keeping text to my flow line so that it does not look awkward

Remove "example"on the example section

Be aware of the image resolution